He mentions that education is more than just facts, it is about the absorption of thoughts, ideas and philosophies. Writing is a vital asset to the expression of a student's overall education.
As I mentioned in my last post, I considered myself a writer at quite a young age. In elementary school my friends and I would sit together on the playground with our journals and read each other's stories. My sisters and I would write play scripts together and perform them in front of our parents. In short, my interest in writing is grounded, largely, in the experiences that I had as young child. Now, in the crazy life of a full time college student and a full time employee, my writing has taken a backseat. Occasionally I get the chance to update my personal blog, write in a journal or even write a poem, but not much more than that-aside from composing emails, texts and letters.
The honest truth is that my students' lives may be just as busy. The truth is that writing may not be the priority that it was for me at that age. Personally, writing is how I prefer to express myself and my ideas. My favorite writing assignments were argumentative papers that expressed my own analysis of literature. Looking back, I liked these the most because I liked feeling like I had a voice that could eloquently express something I was passionate about.
I have never been a master of oral language. I stumble over my words and become frustrated because I cannot express myself the way that I want to. However, writing has always been a good way of communicating exactly what I want to. I cannot count on the level of interest, similar to that which I had for the subject, to drive my students the same way that it did for me. Chances are, many of them may prefer to express and communicate orally or through some other medium-such as art or music. However, I believe that each student should display comprehension and understanding of basic writing skills. Moreover, their interests and the things which they are passionate about, may not be literature; they may prefer to talk about cars, science, politics, sports, etc. For this reason, I believe that having a feel for my students' interests and learning styles is important in structuring writing opportunities for them.
I also believe that students can get too caught up in the "correctness" of writing to the point where the ideas, content and expression become secondary. For this reason, I think that providing students with opportunities to produce multiple drafts is vitally important. Instead of having them focus on all the aspects of their writing all at once, which often only adds to the "daunting" feeling, they must first get their ideas on paper. Once that is done, students should be invited to revisit their writing and critically analyze the way that they use language.
This is a great post! I am of the same mind that it's important for teachers to provide opportunities for students to re-draft and "perfect" their work. I also like your focus on the importance of content in a paper, and not just grammar. One thing I wonder about for my own classroom is: how will I structure students doing multiple drafts of assignments in my class? Will I rely on a workshop method with peers? Or will I provide feedback? I think it's so hard to build time into a unit for fixing multiple drafts (but maybe that's just me). What do you think?
ReplyDeleteI think that it is possible to utilize both a workshop method and feedback from the teacher. I had a magnificent teacher that was able to do this! I also think that peer workshops are important as students begin to develop an understanding of the revision process, which can be a tricky one for students because most of the time they seem to think that revision=editing and fixing typos.
ReplyDeleteI do think that providing meaningful feedback is very hard to put in practice when you are an English teacher, especially when you have 210 students. I've noticed that some English teachers respond to this daunting challenge by asking their students to write less, but then students miss out on growth through constant and repeated writing.
ReplyDeletePersonally, I cannot imagine going back to the days where I wrote by hand on student assignments. I would not be able to say half of the things that I say to students if I had to write my words out by hand. I know that Canvas has a tool where you can also respond to students verbally. One of the best professors I ever had gave us MP3 files of his thoughts on our papers, which I really liked.
Obviously, peer revision is another method of responding to student writing, which is also imperfect because many students are not as practiced at evaluating as the teacher is. Still another good solution is 'training' parents and other volunteers to read papers, perhaps putting something in a letter home at the beginning of the year. I used to have parent readers when I taught middle school English, and I thought that worked well because all students got thoughtful comments from an adult. At the same time, however, I always wanted to read most of my students' assignments because then I felt like I knew them better as writers and as people.
All to say, the amount of time and care to spend on responding to student writing always seems to me to be a recurrent 'issue' that I have never fully resolved. Maybe you will find a way.
I never thought of using multiple drafts to spread out the truly daunting 6 traits and everything else. That actually makes a lot of sense. IN the first draft, the students would probably focus on ideas and content. Next, we work on organization and fluency. Lastly, we work on word-choice and voice, and fine-tune the grammar. Brilliant idea.
ReplyDeleteAlso, I like how you mentioned Mr. Feeny's idea that "education is more than just facts, it is about the absorption of thoughts, ideas and philosophies." This reminded me of a Jonathan Swift book (I think it was Gulliver's Travels) where he visits a land in which no one speaks. They believed that speaking damaged the lungs, so they decided to carry huge sacks of objects on their backs. Their "conversations" with each other consisted of showing each other objects from their sacks. This obvious parody has a striking parallel with the older educational model of dumping facts (or objects) into our students minds (the sacks of their backs). Our communication involves so much more than imparting factual information!
Great blog.
I really like how you said that sometimes students can get caught up in the rules of writing that they lose focus on what they are writing. That is how I felt when I wrote papers. I would watch the word count or now many pages I was writing. In one class, the teacher didn't give us any specifications on paper length, we were just supposed to answer all of the questions. I ended up with 7 pages because I just opened up and wrote. That is what I want for my students.
ReplyDeleteI asked several friends what they were pitfalls they felt their high school English teachers fell into on a regular basis. One friend mentioned how a teacher had raked him over the coals for writing about an inappropriate subject, skateboarding. He said and as you have in your post about allowing students to write about their passions. I think you are completely in having students explore these passions to open up their minds to the world of writing.
ReplyDeleteAs you say I think it is very important to give students a chance to write about something they are passionate about. I know that when I was in high school I found it very hard to write about things that I knew nothing about, at which point I filled papers with fluff. By letting them write about things that they know you can gain a better understanding of where they are in writing proficiency because they have something to say.
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